The only thing I haven't completely decided on is the best method of grounding the tank itself. I was thinking of running a 14AWG wire from the tank fill to the tank grounding tab, then from the grounding tab to my negative bus. Will this suffice?
Your sketch looks good to me. If possible, try to loop in your vent fitting so the hose comes down to vent from above and forward. This will reduce chance of water making its way into your vent line.